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Monday, June 9, 2014

0003 - a slap in the face

       Samael spoke, his voice throbbing inside me.
Samael spoke and I knew him; "chief of Satans" and "the great prince in heaven" ~ accuser, seducer and destroyer.
“You waste your self.” My heart cramped.
“You don’t deserve to live.” My throat cramped.
“Say your prayers.” My stomach cramped.
Now I lay me down to sleep, I huddle, cower, hide and weep...